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Monday, April 1, 2019

100 Word Challenge Week #27

I sit in the corner of the room on the hard cold floor, wondering what had happened, where I was. All of a sudden a door opens.
"Apple?" Some lady asks.
"Um, no thanks." I reply.
"Why not? It's freshly picked."
"I don't really have an appetite right now." I lie. I hadn't eaten in hours.
"One bite can't hurt." She really wasn't giving up on this one.
"But... but it is the wrong colour!" I say, staring at the moldy green apple.
"Eat it like your life depends on it." She says strangely.
"Why?" I ask.
"Because it does."

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    1. Thanks Lucius! I'll check yours out at reading tomorrow!

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    1. Thanks Piera! I'll visit your blog tomorrow!

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  3. Dear Allie,
    It is Ava from http://avassis21.edublogs.org/
    I really love your story and how you were very descriptive. Please keep in touch. I like how you ended the story in suspense. Is it like the Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs story? Again, I really like it and please continue writing more.
    From,
    Ava
    http://avassis21.edublogs.org/

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    1. Thanks Ava! I'm heading over to your blog now! It was based on Snow White partly! I'm also about to post my Week #5 Blogging Challenge so I would love if you could check it out too!

      From your writing buddy!
      Allie!

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  4. This is so good Allie! Your blog is so cool i like your 100 word challenge

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  5. WOW! This really got me thinking.. what will happen next??? Is this meant to be like Snow White or something?
    P.S. This is a great piece of writing.
    Emily!!!

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